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Wow - the kid has got guts! Go Gabs! :)
And is Venus just in a skimpy outfit due to everybody being woken in the middle of the night or is it because she's an interrogator? Aww, who cares? HAWTNESS! Lol! ;)
- a_o_t_8.
And is Venus just in a skimpy outfit due to everybody being woken in the middle of the night or is it because she's an interrogator? Aww, who cares? HAWTNESS! Lol! ;)
- a_o_t_8.
Thank you, a_o_t_8.
Yes, you're right on the money. Venus is in her nighty because it's the middle of the night.
Yes, you're right on the money. Venus is in her nighty because it's the middle of the night.
This is a good what should we call it, well a good comic.
But you keep jumping too much, it's kinda hard too follow.
First, you saw some pictures of a woodsman, then suddenly you see a research facility, then the scientists go missing without even seeing anything happen.
I feel like something is missing, and the jumps between one thing and another are too big.
Focus more on trying to make everything have red line, if you know what i mean. You need to have something visible so that you understand what's happening, i kept getting confused.
Great job otherwise.
But you keep jumping too much, it's kinda hard too follow.
First, you saw some pictures of a woodsman, then suddenly you see a research facility, then the scientists go missing without even seeing anything happen.
I feel like something is missing, and the jumps between one thing and another are too big.
Focus more on trying to make everything have red line, if you know what i mean. You need to have something visible so that you understand what's happening, i kept getting confused.
Great job otherwise.
Thank you for the advice, Matthew. I have to admit that I'm learning a lot doing this style of storytelling.
I hope you're willing to stick it through.
I hope you're willing to stick it through.
That and calling the major of Butter. I suppose it sounds like a clever pun but it really clashes.
We can\'t help having the name that we\'re born with ;)
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